What do you think? (All Grown Up)

Post by **Emora Deen** » Sun Apr 02, 2006 8:21 pm

Well, Rai hates herself for making love to Edan, because she hates Edan. And Cyrus just hit a nerve and reminded her of that night when she slept with the man she hated. That's why the comment was hurtful to her.

And Cyrus and Odoff only think it was hurtful because she seemed hurt by it. Thats the only reason Cyrus really knew that he shouldn't have said that. They have no idea why it was so hurtful really... But, Cyrus will find out soon!

Meagan · Post by **Meagan** » Mon Apr 03, 2006 6:48 pm

Hurray! Great chapter! Cyrus is kinda mean, though... I LOVE HIM!!! *glomps* Rai will straighten out his little attitude. XD

Post by **Emora Deen** » Tue Apr 18, 2006 1:53 pm

Soo... I'm at a lost as to what should come next... I need a filler before I get to how there going to destroy Edan...

Any one got an requests?

Meagan · Post by **Meagan** » Tue Apr 18, 2006 2:57 pm

Romance between Rai and Cyrus.

Just a little, though. A kiss, maybe. Or... I could kidnap Cyrus and take him to my place before he has the same fate as Steel!

Praxis the Sorrow · Post by **Praxis the Sorrow** » Tue Apr 18, 2006 9:06 pm

Praxis:

What??!! Mortals destroy MY son! Never.... Unless he's an idiot and keeps obsessing about that insignifigant woman. I seriously need to knock some sense into that boy or let those weak mortals do it for me. Hmmm...hiring a succubus to....distract him would work as well...

<Sighs> it would be easier just to disown the whelp....

Meagan · Post by **Meagan** » Wed Apr 19, 2006 11:49 am

Maybe Shea needs to put Praxis on a shorter leash.

Post by **Emora Deen** » Wed Apr 19, 2006 3:30 pm

Lol, don't worry. Shea will come into the story eventually and chew him out for everything

and Cyrus and Ray will have the romantic moments

Post by **Soran Nightblade** » Wed Apr 26, 2006 7:57 pm

WHAAAA I want more! Poor Cyrus! And Rai! And Edan needs to be pelted with cauliflowers!

Meagan · Post by **Meagan** » Thu Apr 27, 2006 7:30 pm

Hmm.... pelt him with cauliflowers? NOT MY EDAN!!! *glomps him* Why do I find the biggest jerk in the story the hottest? O.o .....Oh yeah, he has wings. XD

Praxis the Sorrow · Post by **Praxis the Sorrow** » Thu Apr 27, 2006 8:46 pm

Praxis: It appears Rai's badboy crush is contaigous..... <Sighs> I guess its inevitable...given his superior bloodline it comes as no suprise.

Post by **Soran Nightblade** » Tue May 02, 2006 7:59 pm

ahhh! I want more! I really like your dramatic development with Rai and Cyrus. Will he really let her go to Edan?

Post by **Emora Deen** » Wed May 03, 2006 2:20 pm

Maybe, maybe not... Maybe Cyrus and Rai will just forget about Odoff and go on there marry little way. XD

Meagan · Post by **Meagan** » Wed May 03, 2006 5:03 pm

They can't forget about Odoff! O_O;;; But maybe it would be better if they did! Because Edan thinks they're dead, and he won't be looking for Rai anymore! And if they showed up to save him, they would know the truth. So, if they know what's best for them, they'll forget about him. BUT!!! Rai would never call for leaving Odoff with Edan, so she and Cyrus get in a fight, because he knows what will happen if they go to rescue him. Then, they kiss and make up, and then--- Sorry, just rambling as usual. >.>

Post by **Soran Nightblade** » Fri May 05, 2006 7:55 pm

Ahhh the sexual tension grows! I loved the new chapter! Only criticism is there's one scene where it says something like "for the first time it struck him how beautiful she was"... I think that happened for the first time a few chapters ago somewhere. Keep going!

Post by **Emora Deen** » Sun May 07, 2006 10:35 am

Yea, I probably have done that once or twice... I tend to forget those sort of things... *looks around and starts waving a watch in front of your face* You never saw it... you never saw it...