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Pfft. Steel just wants lap dancing...
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lol yea..>_> naughty boy you..

Mizuki: It's ok...-pats Soran's back-
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AHHHHHHHHHHH I need the next part now! Come on the prince can't be ALL that bad, right?? *shiny eyes*
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*cackles* Like mother and father... like son.
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Come on, Praxis isn't that bad. He's all mushy deep down. And he's got wings. *sudden thought* *GASP* Does prince have wings???????
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*GRINS* Maybe....
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*explodes into a million sparkly pieces and floats around in anticipation*
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*grins* Sexy firy wings.... :P
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Post by Emora Deen »

Sooo.... What do yall think of Steel dying? And what about Cyrus and Odoff? *cackles*
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.........
I still can't believe you killed Steel. Now, I think we should kill you. Who all's with me?

But then...Cyrus is cool...I like Cyrus...
But Edan is cooler! Edan is my favorite character! Woohoo!
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When I have some free time, I'll check it out.
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Post by Soran Nightblade »

WOOOOOOOT! Wow it keeps getting better and better \^o^/ I really liked Steel's death scene, even if I didn't get into Steel that much. I thought he was taking the easy way out at first for breaking his word to serve in the army, but then I found out the army broke its word to be served, so I guess they're even. The only thing is, I didn't understand at first that he'd been impaled. It said that a sword ran through his arm, but that didn't sound like a mortal wound, and then it said he'd been run through. Cyrus is becoming interesting now hehe.

BUT NOT AS INTERESTING AS EDAN!!! >_<

The dancing scene was oddly......sexy. lol It was a really good scene, when he caught her I was like "oooh la la". Looking forward to the next chapter!
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*drools* I like Edan. He's funny. I seriously laughed out loud when she asked, "Are you still here?" and he said... "No." *glomps Edan* He's hot, too!

Great chapter!
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I don't think.

Oh you meant about the story.

I think it needs a giant in it.
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Post by Soran Nightblade »

Wheeeeee write moooooore! Nooooooooow! I don't know how you took such a potentially depressing situation with Rai and Edan stuck together and managed to make so many parts....hilarious... lol! Not that it's not dramatic and horrible, but I so agree with Meagan, Edan's adorable in his evil way *sinister grin* Moooore pleeeeeaase
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