What do you think? (All Grown Up)
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WOOOOOOOT! Wow it keeps getting better and better \^o^/ I really liked Steel's death scene, even if I didn't get into Steel that much. I thought he was taking the easy way out at first for breaking his word to serve in the army, but then I found out the army broke its word to be served, so I guess they're even. The only thing is, I didn't understand at first that he'd been impaled. It said that a sword ran through his arm, but that didn't sound like a mortal wound, and then it said he'd been run through. Cyrus is becoming interesting now hehe.
BUT NOT AS INTERESTING AS EDAN!!! >_<
The dancing scene was oddly......sexy. lol It was a really good scene, when he caught her I was like "oooh la la". Looking forward to the next chapter!
BUT NOT AS INTERESTING AS EDAN!!! >_<
The dancing scene was oddly......sexy. lol It was a really good scene, when he caught her I was like "oooh la la". Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Wheeeeee write moooooore! Nooooooooow! I don't know how you took such a potentially depressing situation with Rai and Edan stuck together and managed to make so many parts....hilarious... lol! Not that it's not dramatic and horrible, but I so agree with Meagan, Edan's adorable in his evil way *sinister grin* Moooore pleeeeeaase