What do you think? (All Grown Up)

Post by **Emora Deen** » Wed May 17, 2006 5:40 pm

Well, I've made it to a brick wall. In my last chapter Rai goes back to Edan, but I stopped it before you witness there reunion because... I don't know what should happen between them... Any ideas?

Post by **Emora Deen** » Mon May 22, 2006 12:35 am

Never mind I got it

Hmm... Maybe one to three more chapters left, depending on what I come up with... I know things are about to get VERY interesting...

Post by **Soran Nightblade** » Mon May 22, 2006 1:41 am

o...m...g

This was a wonderful chapter! It really wrenched me when Rai thought Cyrus left and she was alone... so glad he came back. AWESOME chapter. Keeps getting better, please write more!

Post by **Emora Deen** » Wed May 24, 2006 12:13 am

Yea, I tried my best to make it dramatic...

I hope I did a good job. Now I am starting on the next chapter... well I would love to start on it, but I don't exactly know WHERE to start it... close to when the distraction is supposed to happen... or that morning.

Post by **Soran Nightblade** » Fri Jul 14, 2006 10:10 pm

OMG!! Awesome ending! I loved it, and Soran's little cameo appearance was fantabulous! *jumps around* SEQUEL!!!!

Meagan · Post by **Meagan** » Sun Jul 16, 2006 7:30 pm

Ahhh! Loved the ending! Poor Soran.. having to watch his little Rai grow up...

Mizuki · Post by **Mizuki** » Mon Jul 17, 2006 1:38 pm

What about Mizuki?! lol eh, "father's daughter" thing going on there. :3 ^_^

Post by **Emora Deen** » Mon Jul 17, 2006 2:27 pm

Mizuki is happy too! But, Soran doesn't want his little girl to have a boyfreind

Mizuki · Post by **Mizuki** » Mon Jul 17, 2006 3:41 pm

haha. Rai is still Soran's little girl ^-^

no phedophilla implied. -.-"