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Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 5:40 pm
by Emora Deen
Well, I've made it to a brick wall. In my last chapter Rai goes back to Edan, but I stopped it before you witness there reunion because... I don't know what should happen between them... Any ideas?
Posted: Mon May 22, 2006 12:35 am
by Emora Deen
Never mind I got it
Hmm... Maybe one to three more chapters left, depending on what I come up with... I know things are about to get VERY interesting...
Posted: Mon May 22, 2006 1:41 am
by Soran Nightblade
o...m...g
This was a wonderful chapter! It really wrenched me when Rai thought Cyrus left and she was alone... so glad he came back. AWESOME chapter. Keeps getting better, please write more!
Posted: Wed May 24, 2006 12:13 am
by Emora Deen
Yea, I tried my best to make it dramatic...
I hope I did a good job. Now I am starting on the next chapter... well I would love to start on it, but I don't exactly know WHERE to start it... close to when the distraction is supposed to happen... or that morning.
Posted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 10:10 pm
by Soran Nightblade
OMG!! Awesome ending! I loved it, and Soran's little cameo appearance was fantabulous! *jumps around* SEQUEL!!!!
Posted: Sun Jul 16, 2006 7:30 pm
by Meagan
Ahhh! Loved the ending! Poor Soran.. having to watch his little Rai grow up...
Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 1:38 pm
by Mizuki
What about Mizuki?! lol eh, "father's daughter" thing going on there. :3 ^_^
Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 2:27 pm
by Emora Deen
Mizuki is happy too! But, Soran doesn't want his little girl to have a boyfreind
Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 3:41 pm
by Mizuki
haha. Rai is still Soran's little girl ^-^
no phedophilla implied. -.-"