Page 5 of 6
Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2006 8:21 pm
by Emora Deen
Well, Rai hates herself for making love to Edan, because she hates Edan. And Cyrus just hit a nerve and reminded her of that night when she slept with the man she hated. That's why the comment was hurtful to her.
And Cyrus and Odoff only think it was hurtful because she seemed hurt by it. Thats the only reason Cyrus really knew that he shouldn't have said that. They have no idea why it was so hurtful really... But, Cyrus will find out soon!
Posted: Mon Apr 03, 2006 6:48 pm
by Meagan
Hurray! Great chapter! Cyrus is kinda mean, though... I LOVE HIM!!! *glomps* Rai will straighten out his little attitude. XD
Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 1:53 pm
by Emora Deen
Soo... I'm at a lost as to what should come next... I need a filler before I get to how there going to destroy Edan...
Any one got an requests?
Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 2:57 pm
by Meagan
Romance between Rai and Cyrus.
Just a little, though. A kiss, maybe. Or... I could kidnap Cyrus and take him to my place before he has the same fate as Steel!
Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2006 9:06 pm
by Praxis the Sorrow
Praxis:
What??!! Mortals destroy MY son! Never.... Unless he's an idiot and keeps obsessing about that insignifigant woman. I seriously need to knock some sense into that boy or let those weak mortals do it for me. Hmmm...hiring a succubus to....distract him would work as well...
<Sighs> it would be easier just to disown the whelp....
Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 11:49 am
by Meagan
Maybe Shea needs to put Praxis on a shorter leash.
Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 3:30 pm
by Emora Deen
Lol, don't worry. Shea will come into the story eventually and chew him out for everything
and Cyrus and Ray will have the romantic moments
Posted: Wed Apr 26, 2006 7:57 pm
by Soran Nightblade
WHAAAA I want more! Poor Cyrus! And Rai! And Edan needs to be pelted with cauliflowers!
Posted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 7:30 pm
by Meagan
Hmm.... pelt him with cauliflowers? NOT MY EDAN!!! *glomps him* Why do I find the biggest jerk in the story the hottest? O.o .....Oh yeah, he has wings. XD
Posted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 8:46 pm
by Praxis the Sorrow
Praxis: It appears Rai's badboy crush is contaigous..... <Sighs> I guess its inevitable...given his superior bloodline it comes as no suprise.
Posted: Tue May 02, 2006 7:59 pm
by Soran Nightblade
ahhh! I want more! I really like your dramatic development with Rai and Cyrus. Will he really let her go to Edan?
Posted: Wed May 03, 2006 2:20 pm
by Emora Deen
Maybe, maybe not... Maybe Cyrus and Rai will just forget about Odoff and go on there marry little way. XD
Posted: Wed May 03, 2006 5:03 pm
by Meagan
They can't forget about Odoff! O_O;;; But maybe it would be better if they did! Because Edan thinks they're dead, and he won't be looking for Rai anymore! And if they showed up to save him, they would know the truth. So, if they know what's best for them, they'll forget about him. BUT!!! Rai would never call for leaving Odoff with Edan, so she and Cyrus get in a fight, because he knows what will happen if they go to rescue him. Then, they kiss and make up, and then--- Sorry, just rambling as usual. >.>
Posted: Fri May 05, 2006 7:55 pm
by Soran Nightblade
Ahhh the sexual tension grows! I loved the new chapter! Only criticism is there's one scene where it says something like "for the first time it struck him how beautiful she was"... I think that happened for the first time a few chapters ago somewhere. Keep going!
Posted: Sun May 07, 2006 10:35 am
by Emora Deen
Yea, I probably have done that once or twice... I tend to forget those sort of things... *looks around and starts waving a watch in front of your face* You never saw it... you never saw it...