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Post by Meagan »

If Rai doesn't want Edan.. Can I have him?! Lol

Great chapter! Can;t wait to see what Edan does now that he's pissed! He's so sexy when he's pissed! How do I know? Erm.... *shrugs*
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that was cheeaaating...*pouts* that was a baaby chapter...
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NOOO!!! Rai can't kill Edan! He's too hott!

I mean.. ahem... Cyrus has to kill him... >.>
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lol, You'll see whats going to happen....
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Mooooore I want moooooore! Whaa Edan's so mean : (
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Edan's a sexy evil guy. :3 mrroow

^_^ =P
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Hehehe
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I love how you poked fun at all the trouble I caused Mizuki with those "boyfriends" teehee. ^_^

What's even more funny is that her "little" brother, grows faster than her so he soon becomes her big/little brother!. =P
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lol, its also ironic that Rai seems to have inherited Mizuki's man trouble.
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Hmmm.. strange... >_> don't know how that could've happened...<_<;; -runs away-
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Wheee Cyrus to the rescue! Make mooooooooore!
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Hurray! Cyrus saved Rai! I don't like Edan anymore.. >.>
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Whaa poor Cyrus fainted... me likes that muahahaha in a whaa I wanna glomp him kind of way.
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Post by Soran Nightblade »

Yay Rai and Cyrus need to glomp each other in the next chapter! But in an angsty grumpyCyrusindignantRai sorta way ^o^ And I think Edan should start sobbing out lovesick rants to the next servant who walks into the room.
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Post by Soran Nightblade »

Woot Cyrus is softening up a bit. Although somehow his comment about Edan didn't seem quite as hurtful to me as all the characters seemed to think by their reactions. I love that the men tried to make Cyrus their loveslave *grin* too bad they failed. I likey! Make more!!!
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