Nadia Saylacoffsky

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Nadia Saylacoffsky

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Name: Nadia Saylacoffsky

Gender: Female

Age: about 18

Race: Elf

Job/Class: Sorceress

Power: The ability to demand water into storms, waves, floods, tide changes, etc.

Appearance: She is about 5'6" and weights about 125. Her hair is honey blonde and it curls from root to tip. She mostly wears a pink robe with a hood and white velvet trim. Her eyes are blue like water.

Weakness: She is vulnerable to very cold temperatures and fire. Extreme cold freezes her ability, it seems to freeze every effort she puts forth in conjuring water. If a raging, uncontrollable fire is present at the time of her conjuring then the fire causes the water to turn to steam, making it impossible to cause anything to happen due to water.

Biography: Nadia is a little sister to Lenna Saylacoffsky and Ishiah. However, Lenna and Ishaih do not know about her. They all share the same father but not mothers. Nadia's mother lives in Lowight and she has been raised there by her. Not too long ago, Nadia learned of her brother and sisters and the father she never knew. When she heard of the tragedy that occured to her other family, she went searching for the only ones left, Lenna and Ishaih. Not finding them in Lowight Nadia decided to begin her search in the Forest.

Her power was derived through her mother, who taught her how to control it. When Nadia was little, she didn't like the water and when she got near it, it would either boil, freeze or receed, depending on her emotions. Now Nadia has learned to control water through her mind and hands.

Personality: Nadia is outgoing and not shy at all. She'll talk to a tree if it would talk back.

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Post by Kyosuke »

Hmm, to what extent can she control the water? I mean, I can think of lots of ways in which manipulation of water can be a skill that wouldn't be balanced out by the weaknesses you have.

Also, the weaknesses themselves aren't that descriptive. Everyone is vulnerable to very cold temperatures and fire, unless they have a resistance to it. Does fire hurt her even more than it would for a normal person? You might want to change the extreme cold thing as well, maybe to another magic that would hurt her more. Depending on how strong you make her water manipulation, perhaps you'd want to add more weaknesses as well.
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Ok...I tried fixing it but I don't know if it's what you were looking for. Just let me know.
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Alright, that's good. I approve of this character.
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\(^_^)/ Approval
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