Zutasar and Humarin Clonen

Amenat · Post by **Amenat** » Thu Mar 02, 2006 7:52 pm

1)Names: Zutasar and Humarin Clonen.

2) Gender: Female

3) Age: 16

4) Race: Human

5) Job/Class: Humarin is a priestess. Zutasar is the demon's slave former priestess, can we say unemployed?

6) Power: Zutasar can use lightening and Humarin has priestess powers.

7) Appearance: Zutasar is about 5' 4", wears black clothes, has long dark brown hair, that is braided into two braids, very light blue eyes that are cold and peircing and carries a doll around. She has a long dark dress, leather boots on and a sword on her hip but she hardly uses it.

Humarin is about 5' 5", dark green eyes, blonde hair which is put up in buns or fishtail braids, blue preistess robes and black boots on. She also has a mace on her side.

8 ) Weaknesses: Both thier weaknesses are each other's powers. Basically when they get near each other Zutasar and Humarin's powers weaken. Zutasar can't use her powers at all and the demon is directly connected to Zutasar so she's any help either. Humarin's emotions won't allow her to hurt Zutasar and Humarin's touch can hurt Zutasar.

9) Biography: Humarin and Zutasar are twins. They were very close almost like best friends at times, sure they annoyed eachother sometimes and fought, but they would find a way to apologize and smile again. So on thier fouteenth birthday, like thier mother wanted, they both set out to become great priestesses.

Since the twins had natural talent to become priestesses they learned quickly and the desicion to test them after a year seemed only right. But while on the test that would determine weather they became priestesses, with several other's from the same church wanted to become priestesses as well.

All the girls being tested had thier masters with them and two of the best priestesses went along as watchers for the nights they had to sleep under the stars. Just before the test could go forward the priestesses found themselves facing a demon. They told all the young girls to get into the wagon they had taked there and head back at once.

They all did so. As fate would have it Humarin and Zutasar were the last ones in the wagon but because of jealousy Zutasar was pushed out by one of the oldest girls there. Humarin didn't know that Zutasar had fallen out until the wagon was at full speed.

The five priestesses that were fighting the demon were killed just as Zutasar got up to run after the wagon by a bolt of lightining. Zutasar screamed as she turned around and saw the demon coming after her and the charred bodies of the priestesses.

Since Humarin was worried about Zutasar she requested that they go back to look for her. She was told that after a few days they would go back to see if Zutasar had survived but she couldn't promise anything. Humarin really believed that her sister was alive, until they went back to the old battle field and saw only carred bodies. Humarin cried because she couldn't protect her sister.

At the age of 16 Humarin had become a powerful priestess in memory of her sister. She carried around a rosary with "taru" scratched into the back of it. 'Taru' was Humarin's nickname for Zutasar. Reports came from all around saying that something was going around killing priestesses, monks, and any others with spiritual powers with lightinign bolts.

Humarin went to check it out and found herself face to face with her sister. But is wasn't the sister she knew, this one was as cold as the grave and had no apparent emotions. Zutasar hadn't grown since she was 15 so she was shorteer and looked like Humarin's younger sister and not her twin. THis new Zutasar found that when she was around her sister her lightining bolts weren't enough to kill a person just shock them a bit.

The new Zutasar carried around a doll which the demon controlled her with, the demon was hiding in the shadows waiting for the time when she could destroy the world slowly gathering power for this one task. The head priestess explained why Zutasar had changed to Humarin. When Humarin heard this though she told the head priestess that she was going to find Zutasar and set her free. The head priestess stopped her and told her that in order to set her sister free then she either needed to kill her sister or get rid of the tie between the demon and her sister otherwise any touch that Zutasar recieves from Humarin could destroy her. Now all Zutasar wants is to find that weak point and free her sister...

10) Personality: Humarin is sweet and carring that only wants to protect those who are weaker than she is. But her biggest want is to save her sister. Humarin is contently worried for others well being and almost never concerns herself with her own.

Zutasar has a cold look in her eyes most of the time and the same personality. She hates all living things now but before she was almost like her sister. She even liked to help innocent creatures but now she takes joy in killing them because of the demon's influence. Since she was taken over she didn't smile.

11) Extras: I have pictures I want to scan.

Post by **Emora Deen** » Thu Mar 02, 2006 9:13 pm

Nice characters

Uh... I want to wait for Kyosuke or Soran to say something about them first though, because Kyosuke is our "strict" admin

Kyosuke · Post by **Kyosuke** » Thu Mar 02, 2006 11:42 pm

Alright, it looks like you left out a job class for Zutasar. Also, expand on her weaknesses a little. What you have right now is a little confusing.

Amenat · Post by **Amenat** » Fri Mar 03, 2006 12:37 am

What exactly was confusing? When something evil and something good get near each other then they can and will cancel out one another that is the basic principal behind the loosing of power between the twins.

I edited the biography so it's a little more believeable XD

Kyosuke · Post by **Kyosuke** » Sat Mar 04, 2006 12:42 am

Alright, you actually did expand on the weaknesses, so now I get em. Actually, those are interesting weaknesses. Also, a job class isn't necessarily an employed job. Usually it's something that best defines a character's abilities, based on fighting style and weapon choice. Personally, I don't even use that / between job and class.

But one more thing, what are priestess powers?

Amenat · Post by **Amenat** » Sat Mar 04, 2006 3:49 am

Healing, a bit of purification, and protection spells.

That's pretty much it. ^_~

Post by **Soran Nightblade** » Sat Mar 04, 2006 2:43 pm

Looks ready to me : )

\(^_^)/ Approval

Kyosuke · Post by **Kyosuke** » Sun Mar 05, 2006 1:49 am

Alright, I approve of this character now. Also, just for organizational purposes I'm going to rename the topic with your character names.

Amenat · Post by **Amenat** » Sun Mar 05, 2006 2:24 am

Arigato.

Eslin · Post by **Eslin** » Wed Mar 08, 2006 3:45 pm

~*~Approved~*~