The retarded Raith

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Jim

The retarded Raith

Post by Jim »

1) Name : Jimo MacJim
2) Gender : Male (the best gender)
3) Age : 24
4) Race : Raith
5) Job/Class : Pirate
6) Power : (fill me in on this, no idea what it means)
7) Appearance : Eyes were no longer the normal color of eyes for humans, but yellow and the pupils small, but they have excellent eyesight. blahdy blah. Oh and hes short, 4 feet 10 inches. Not sure what that is in milimeters cause I'm american.
8) Weaknesses : Hes short
9) Biography : His parents kicked him out of the home 4 years ago cause he was taking up too much room. He became a pirate cause he thought they looked cool.
10) Personality : He has a very short personality.
11) Extras : Hes short.
Jim

Post by Jim »

I'm sorry I forgot to add in weaknesses.

He does not have that Portal or Changer power cause that is waaay pver powered. I mean like...cmon. Also he has the fear power just it only make you afraid of brushing your teeth.
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Post by Soran Nightblade »

This character lacks the thought and detail that we look for in player characters, but it is very entertaining!

(Heirot hates untall characters. No approval.)

(....except Rai)
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Post by Kyosuke »

Yeah, I agree with Soran on that... or do I? I guess I do actually
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Post by Jim »

the "blahdy blah" part was where you are supposed timagine a wonderful symphony of discription and creativity for my char. But since that won't work anymore I'll have to just write more. :cry:

Lemme know if I canot post it here in this same topic and I'll be sure to make a new one.

1) Name : Jimo MacJim
2) Gender : Male (the best gender)
3) Age : 24
4) Race : Raith
5) Job/Class : Pirate
6) Power : (Found out what it means, ty) Hes got the power to hit things, but other than that hes very useless.
7) Appearance : Eyes are the normal color of eyes for humans, but yellow and the pupils small, but they have excellent eyesight. He looks like a normal human, of course his eyes give him away but who really looks someone in the eyes any more right? His skin is not bronze it is acually sickly white, much the color as someone who spends too much time on RP forums instead of going outside when the sun is out. His hair... oh man his hair! His hair is long and... Hot Green! Yes excelent. Green and long, with a curl here and there. Large curls though not tiny curls that women get. He also has a medium sized beard. it dosn't go past his neck yet but it's almost there. And yes it is also Hot Green. His nose is large and jewish, much like what a person of jewish decent would have. Of course though he is by no means jewish. His upper body and lower body are about equally as buff. Also all of his body hair is Hot Green so he almost looks like he is radiactive when hes naked. He has thick legs, not fat, but not chiken legs. The green leg hair he has is grimy from being a pirate but is not very thick. His arms are built like his legs, sexy and green, with no thick hair. He sometimes wears face makeup to look pretty, but deep inside it's cause he crys at night with green eye liner. It goes down under his eyes and get smaller like a stretched out V under his eye down his face. The paint color is green also. He really likes green. When he has his shirt off he has a green little happy trail that goes up to his chest, it's dosn't cover his chest like a moss though, it's just a green happy trail. He got manly breasts also, the ones you can flex and make them squeeze a bit. He likes doin that alot, flexin his boobs. He still has his teeth, except the bottom front left one, that feel out. He still short, not midget short anymore but 5 feet 11 inches short. That's exceptable darnit all! And um... I love him.
8) Weaknesses : He has no powers from his blood line of Raiths, other then his physical abilitys like good sight and strangth.
9) Biography : His parents kicked him out of the home 4 years ago cause he was taking up too much room. He became a pirate cause he thought they looked cool. Hes still a "swaby" but hes still a sexy swaby. His past is pretty boring but if you REALLY wana know about him I'll type it all out from birth to now.
10) Personality : He gets huffy when hes pushed around, trys to take control of things when they don't steer his way. He likes to think hes all that when hes not even near that, or even in the same country as that. Also hes a homosexual, but hes a bit discrete about it and does not splash around in everyone's face like the "bisexual" guys at school who only say they are "bi" cause they think girls like guys who do other guys in the pooper.
11) Extras : Hes my kinda man.

Also sorry if you cannot make out what some of it says, I wrote it without my glasses on cause they broke.
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Post by Soran Nightblade »

Great! I love green! Pale and radioactive looking is surely my type of man!

Alright, I think this character's definitely different, but ready to use. I think the detail you added to his personality really helps flesh him out, and if you ever do get around to it, fill us in on his past (I, at least, am as bored as you say).

You have a talent for humor, and it would definitely be nice to incorporate this into your roleplaying. My only word of advice is to take note of the mood and dramatic atmosphere of whatever thread you join, and make sure that your great sense of humor contributes rather than distracts from the plot and dramatic action at hand.

\(^_^)/ Approval
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Post by Kyosuke »

I'm just gonna go with Soran on this one and approve this character.
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~~APPROVED~~
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Post by Amenat »

OMG lol... This is Kahli, btw. Jim, this is frickin hilarious... good character description. Later ^^
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No relation to the hacker named kahli. :lol:
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Post by Soran Nightblade »

Just for future reference, try to avoid using character submission forms as chat threads.
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