To The End Of The World/A Fairy Tale

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Mizuki

To The End Of The World/A Fairy Tale

Post by Mizuki »

I'm actually writing a story about Zeik and Kat! ^_^ While it'll take me forever to finish it I hope you guys read and give me helpfull reviews for it! It should be really interesting!

Summary: To The End Of The World is about a slave girl who runs away from her newest Master with his child in her womb. While the pain of leaving her only love tears her apart, she starts work in a Inn in order to make a life for herself and her coming child. But new pain rips her apart when her child is born dead, and once again she must leave for the memories are too painfull, and her lover/Master has come looking for her. She doesn't want him to know she had failed to give him a baby so she leaves again. Upon leaving, she runs into a beast of a man--if he is a man. Half man, half dragon and with a deep grudge against all human and dragon kind. He is also the chosen of a deity to bring the end of the world. He takes Kat as his own slave and they journey to complete his destiny. But along the way, they discover truths about his 'destiny', among other things...
http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=2190551

Please read and enjoy!
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Post by Soran Nightblade »

Good to see you're still duking it out with fictionpress ^_~ If I were to read this or your fairy tale story, which would you rather me read (first at least, I'm so slow)?
Mizuki

Post by Mizuki »

A Fairy Tale has more to it right now. Both on my FP account and at my website, but there's more at my website cause I butchered the newest chapters so people had to go to my website. =P A Fairy Tale has only two more chapters to go before it's done, that's why I'm taking forever on the last two chapters. I want them to be GOOD.

Though I don't mind having a review for To The End of The World. :3
Mizuki

Post by Mizuki »

A Fairy Tale has finally been finished with 6 chapters! xD I'm proud of myself since it's the first thing I've ever finished! (not counting one shots.)

Please go read and review ^_^ It'd make my day and I plan on publishing it so really, point out any mistakes you find, ok?
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