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“The one I can’t have”

Posted: Sat May 27, 2006 4:33 pm
by Airen
I'm not someone who normally writes but we were doing sonnets during school and for some reason I wanted to write this. I'm not going to say who this poem is to because too many people on here went to school with me and they don't need to know names. This is to a girl who has led me on and broke my heart a few times and for some reason I can't get over her.


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In your heart and beauty you have know flaws .
The words you speak are always soft and kind.
The way I feel for you defies all laws
When your around I seem to lose my mind.

I can never find the right words to say.
When the sun shines on you, your beauty glows
I long to see you each and every day
I smell your sweet essence when the wind blows

Your true feelings you seem to often hide
I let you control me and how I feel
You lead me on and that can’t be denied
As much as I hate it I love you still

What I feel for you will always be true
Not one thing could make me stop loving you.

Posted: Sat May 27, 2006 4:42 pm
by Meagan
Awww. It's beautiful, Airen! It's so sweet and sad. The first stanza is my favorite.

Posted: Sun May 28, 2006 1:56 pm
by Emora Deen
Its pretty and very deep. I like it!