Rogue

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Corinth

Rogue

Post by Corinth »

1) Name: Rogue

2) Gender: Female

3) Age: Unknown

4) Race: Vampire

5) Job/Class: Wonderer

6) Power: Extreme Strength and Very Seductive

7) Appearance: Wears black leather pants and vest with a crimson red blouse, a black cape, and black thick boots (kinda like combat boots). Has long, straight, black hair and brown eyes. She’s about 5’8’’ and weights about 135 lbs.

8) Weaknesses: Of course, holy images, wooden stakes, fire, and silver. She's allergic to cats.

9) Biography: No one knows exactly where she came from. She just appeared one day in Heirot. When she was a little girl she got attacked by the family cat and ever since then she's been scared of them. She also developed an allergy to cats when she was small.

One day a stranger befriended her father. Rogue thought him quite handsome. It turns out, one cold night this dark man feed fiendishly on her family. Her mother and father always wanted boys and she was their only child. They were cold to her and tried to raise her as someone she wasn't. That's why she can fight so well and is so cold. When it came to be her turn to die, she pleaded for her life. She bargained for the immortal life placing her dignity on the line. In return for the immortal kiss, she gave herself as his mate and companion. As a gift to his new love, this mysterious vamp gave Rogue a pit-bulldog for their new life together. He taught her everything he was taught when he was created. One day, he didn’t return to the lair. He was killed with a stake to the heart. Needless to say Rogue wasn’t bothered by his absence. (More for her :twisted: )

10) Personality: Selfish of her possessions and her intelligence, feminist, sly, quite, agile

11) Extras: Rogue has a pit-bull, named Evil, who obeys her every command. She even uses him in her evil plots and ploys, hence the name Evil.
Last edited by Corinth on Mon Jan 23, 2006 3:47 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Emora Deen
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Post by Emora Deen »

*A shadowed form sneaks into the room* Good... there not around... Anyways... hmm.... Eh... I'll let Kyosuke decide. :P
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Post by Kyosuke »

Everything except for the biography is fine. You should write about some of the points of her past, even if you leave out some details that you plan to have revealed about her as your RP goes along.
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Post by Kyosuke »

Alright, I'll approve of this character. Also, just in case you didn't know, if you're just creating an enemy or something for your character that would basically get killed at the end of the storyline or something, then you can just make that person an NPC.
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Post by Soran Nightblade »

I think I can approve now. The only thing I am confused by is her "just appearing one day on Heirot". That makes it sound like she materialized from some other world. I think you mean she just doesn't remember her homeland though, which is fine. Just keep in mind that we don't accept backstories from planes of existence outside of Heirot. But she's good to go!

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