Heirot

Hmm, this seems like a good idea to do at the time Anyhoo, yup, if anyone has ideas or comments or suggestions or requests for fanservice re: Scars, feel free! I'd love advice, feel free to nitpick or recommend changes in style/content/so forth as long as you're tactful (I'm so delicate ).

Add some humor in it sort of like Piers Anthony's stuff puns and other British humor.

I <3 it. But the little girl?! Who is it?!?!?!?! Is she like...some...love he had in his past? (when she gets older) cause if so, and we meet up with her... Mizuki's not gnna be happy. >_> Really...

I'm getting death threats now.

Mizuki: -jealousy vibes-

I likey! Lotsa blood! WEEE!!! I love blood and gore!

Lol, yeah, it's a bit gore-heavy. *teases Mizuki mercilessly for being jealous of a 5-year old* Ohh we'll see about that next chapter, shan't we? lol *cackles*

AAAHHHH! Do You HAVE ANY IDEA THAT SHE'S ATTACKING ME WITH HER ARROWS?!!? -runs around trying to dodge-

Mizuki: -keeps firing-

Me: Not me! Soran!! SORAN!!!!

So... that's how those armblades came about, eh? Nooiiiice! =P

*glows*

lol You take pride in your work, huh? =P

Yes, when I work it's as if I'm surrounded by dancing elven men with kilts and bagpipes. Though I don't suppose you'd ever be able to appreciate the beauty in that~!

o_O >_> I have no idea of what you're accusing me of!

Although I still say they look like skirts!

...omg...Soran in a kilt!!! lmfao.. must...draw!!!

Ok, story time.

So Kyosuke is helping me with a paragraph in Scars 7 that has too many pronouns and confused him.

I replace the pronouns with proper names.

He notes that now there are too many Rhen's and Rone's.

I change it again to be a combination of both. Then...

Hyperzorch (2:03:30 AM): lol I might have made it worse
Jian Hei Long (2:03:57 AM): bah, now i think Rhen kicked himself in the chest
Jian Hei Long (2:04:00 AM): jk
Hyperzorch (2:04:13 AM): hahhahahahaha
Hyperzorch (2:04:20 AM): *falls out of chair*
Jian Hei Long (2:04:24 AM): *sweatdrops*
Hyperzorch (2:04:26 AM): hahahahahhaahhaaha
Hyperzorch (2:04:38 AM): hahahaahaa
Jian Hei Long (2:04:48 AM): ^^;;;
Hyperzorch (2:04:54 AM): o_o
Hyperzorch (2:04:56 AM): hahaha
Jian Hei Long (2:04:56 AM): i think i broke her
Hyperzorch (2:04:57 AM): aaahahahahah
Jian Hei Long (2:08:07 AM): *sweatdrops* are you ok now?
Jian Hei Long (2:08:20 AM): uh oh, i think i killed her...
Jian Hei Long (2:08:25 AM): *shifty eyes*
Jian Hei Long (2:08:45 AM): *drags you off into a dark room*
Jian Hei Long (2:14:43 AM): erm, ikiteru?
Hyperzorch (2:15:15 AM): ..............................IKITEIRU!
Jian Hei Long (2:15:33 AM): oh erm... *puts clothing back on and retreats from dark room*
Jian Hei Long (2:15:48 AM): *shifty eyes again*
Hyperzorch (2:15:49 AM): lol
Jian Hei Long (2:16:13 AM): did you really laugh that hard at what i said?
Hyperzorch (2:17:36 AM): yes
Hyperzorch (2:17:40 AM): lol
Jian Hei Long (2:17:46 AM): ^^;;;
Hyperzorch (2:17:52 AM): because i got a mental image
Hyperzorch (2:17:58 AM): of Rhenkicking himself in the chest
Jian Hei Long (2:18:03 AM): hehe
Jian Hei Long (2:20:07 AM): now i expect a picture of that mental image


And thus.....this was born

Ahahahahahahaahahahahahaha

Yes, Rhen is...uh... doublejointed! ..did I forget to mention that?

Actually I was wondering, if anyone gets a chance to read it, if the end part of part 7 made sense. I attempted not to overexplain what happened with Rone and the secretary, but if that made it confusing, let me know. The idea was that Rone fired her for giving Cerno the file where Rhen's old nickname was written along with the rest of his personal history. And...is the story 'working'?

Yes, everything made sense. Yes, everything is 'working.'

One question. About the little girl. Was he just going insane? Did I miss why that happened, or are you going to explain that later?

Other than that, its GRRRRRRREAT! (hehe. the frosted flakes tiger! )