Billiam Suggins

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Billiam Suggins

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Name: Billiam Suggins

Race: Avart (Ogre/Powrie crossbreed)

Age 17

Strengths: Ability to eat anything, expert in melee combat and strong resistance to Earth magic

Weaknesses: No social skills, complacent and has very painful hemmoroids

Occupation: Mercenary

Story

Born in the Alpinador, raised by ogres and powries, he became a veritable one "man" army that sought only to fill his need for food. He went from Alpinadorian settlement first fighting the old warriors left to defend the women at home; Upon finding out that he could dislocate his jaws to allow him to devour horses whole, he went to attacking Alpinadorian Rquads(mounted Alpinadorian raiding parties consisting of 15-20 men).
Alpinador horses remain to this day Billiam's favorite meal but also the cause of his greatest pain .... his hemmoroids. Now he has boarded ship seeking new lands to spread his influence in. I ask you is thier any room for an Avart here?
BILLIAM

Revisions ? Add-ins? I don't know

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Apperance: Stocky, 6'4" 260lbs Like 200cm and 120kg I think don't hold me to the hieght and wieght in metric I am American.
Farmer's tan

Wearing:Black Leather tunic with steel mail on top

Weapon of choice: Claymore

Religon:Disciple of Chaos

Most likely heard saying: " Grog, Grub, Gals,and Gout. The four things..... got to go"
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Soran Nightblade
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Post by Soran Nightblade »

Interesting! Before I approve or disapprove, three questions:

1) What is a Powrie?
2) Since Alpinador is not a real location in Heirot yet that I know of, which country and area would you propose it be located in (Arken or Ighten?).
3) Could you tell a bit about your character's personality? Is he a friendly person? Generally 'good' or 'evil' or 'indifferent', etc?

Also, just fyi, there are several religions already set up in Heirot, and your god of chaos sounds like he resembles the God of Darkness, who is worshipped by those in Arken. If you want Chaos to be a new religion (of the ogres, for example), that is probably fine, but just thought I'd let you know. Descriptions of Heirot's established geography, cities, religions, etc can be found in the "About Heirot" Section on the main forum index.
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Post by Kyosuke »

Pretty much the same thing as what Soran said for me. I'd also like to know somewhat more regarding his backstory. Also, what's an avart? if you mean a picture of your character, then sure, go ahead and post it.
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To Soran

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1. A powrie: Little more than a best that is capable of speech, They made a pact with the God of Chaos to allow them to be remade into beings of earth and fire. About 4 ft 100lbs on average very small but very strong.

2. BILLIAM's power of eating anything comes from the fire that rages in his stomach. Also because ogres have ver sensitive lower intestines that whatever survives the actual stomache and passes through causes BILLIAM great pain by ripping through ..... well you know what is down there.

3.Arken would be a very suitable place for Alpinador, because the Avart and BILLIAM are a more than a bit on the shady side of the scale of right and wrong.
BILLIAM

Personality

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Though not much on social races Billiam is a raging alcholic that will out drink a dwarf and a cow at the same time, long story that I will explain later that invovled 10,000 crowns and an Alpinadorian stallion.

Very HEAD STRONG WILL RAM HEAD INTO any wall and crush it utterly or die in the attempt his only loyalty is to himself and his current employer
but that too can change for a price.
BILLIAM

Alpologies and more

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OOC: Sorry that my posts are short I go to school 47 hours a week, play football and work.

Personality cont.: all in all Billiam is pretty awful.
BILLIAM

Backstory ,Now that I got the time

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As I said before Billiam was rather cursed from the start because of his birth his mother an Ogre his father a Powrie, he wasn't a very good looking being, creature...thing. Luckily he wasn't alone up in the Alpinador Avart are quite common. Growing up in the largest Avart village ( Alvarnt with a pop. of 200 Avart in all) he was bullied as a child by the Powrie children who tormented him for being so stupid. Because his father had actually stuck around to teach him how to master "the fire in the belly" he eventually ate most of the Powrie kids and was sent into exile. He was 7 years old at the time and all alone until he met a goblin mmercenary named Tranm who took him in sensing Billiam's powers, trained him to use his size and wieght to his advantage in a fight. Billiams continued training with Tranm until his 16th birthday in which Tranm presented Billiam with his own armor and claymore. OOC: got to go now.
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Post by Kyosuke »

Eh, I'll approve of this character. However, next time please make it all in one post. Remember, you can edit old posts. It helps with organization. Also, please keep to the format we set out, even if you make extra categories or divide a category into several different ones.
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Post by Soran Nightblade »

I'll approve. Since you've invented your own race, city, and religion, I can't tell if you've read up on Heirot yet, but if not, take a few minutes to look over the 'about Heirot' section and our rping standards in the rules section. Have fun rping!

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