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Jeez kisses are hard to draw! I'd be better off drawing octopi doing yoga. After hours of wasting erasers, this still didn't come out the way I intended, but I'm gonna give up for today and maybe try another one next weekend. ANYHOO this is supposed to be Soran and Mizuki's first kiss :



I'm told that this cropped version looks better because something is wrong with Soran's hands, so here's the "not weird" one:

lol, it didn't look weird to me! It looks great! So sweet! AWW!

ooooo......yay! i likey! its not that bad. although i do like ur other drawings better but i wouldn't say u were horrible at drawing people kissing!!! it is kinda hard. i usualy have to look at something. ask emora. half my pictures i looked at something....>_<

why didn't i see this until now!? it's AWESOME!!! ^_^ I really love how the heads are angled!! I envy you... lol

I think it looks pretty good!

Yay thanks guys! ^_^

I see what is wrong, it looks like his hand is off her back, unless it's supposed to be. But it's a good pick, I like it!

And erm, hmm, can u give me a little background to this whole kiss thing? I never read the old topics, lol!

ah.. i see!

I don't see anythign wronge with the arms at all, maybe it's just me and my 4inch glasses.

You could always try diffrent types of kisses, like eskimo kisses where they just touch their noses together. Or drunk pervert kisses where they start making out with someone cheeck cause they are too drunk to care.

Ah, you may be right Em. I also think Mizuki's hair isn't drawn well, since it ought to fall over his hands a little bit.

Background on the kiss:

Soran is a stern, seemingly hard-hearted rogue who, after losing his memory and living alone in the forest for several years and then living in a bad section of Hepian, has a keen aversion to becoming close to other people. He bumped into Mizuki in Hepian ( http://www.heirot.com/viewtopic.php?t=33 if you feel like following the story) when he wound up saving her life from a mean ex-boyfriend (of whom she has many, I might add ). Many adventures later, the group now includes a little girl named Rai (Emora's char) whom they've more or less adopted and a very mischievous dark angel woman named Siren (the girltoy of one of Mizuki's ex-boytoys...long story). Anyway, though Mizuki's been pretty open about her feelings for Soran, Soran's been extremely hesitant to admit he likes her back, even to himself, meaning he's often even colder to her than he is to other people. So finally, while they were doing laundry by the river during a little vacation from all their battles, he came to terms with his feelings at least a little, and when Mizuki started crying because she'd been raped (by an ex boyfriend..but from a past life!) Soran gave up fighting and wheeeeeeeeeeeee (p 10-11 http://www.heirot.com/viewtopic.php?t=1 ... &start=135 )

(It was only a matter of time; Mizuki is one sexy ex-pirate!)

Thank you! ^-^ -bows- thank you! ...yea...Mizuki's life is quite weird. If you ever even wanna try and understand it, you can PM me or maybe someday I'll get to explaining it all in the Writing's section =P. Her life is so confusing that even I'm a bit lost of where it all came from ^_~ =P

Ex-boyfriends are alway trying to do something to her? Like rape her and stuff like that? Poor Mizuki. How dare you put her through the same thing over and over and over and over again!

Or am I just not getting the whole thing? Well, i know i'm not getting the whole thing, but it sounds to me like Mizuki's ex-boyfriends are always trying to rape her or something and that's basically all that happens. From the way you put it anyway...

Nah, Mizuki and her relationships are both more complicated than that. She had one ex boyfriend from this life, then a self-proclaimed ex boyfriend from a past life who did rape her, and the third person was basically just a necromaniac who became obsessed with her. Even if there were recurring themes in the overall Mizuki-crazed villain->kidnapping->rescue mission plots, a lot more happened than that, because in the course of all these trials the members of our group were able to form tighter bonds with each other and learn more about themselves.

And everything happened to Mizuki?

Well, there was also a case in which Rai was kidnapped by Queen Shea and we had to go to Arken to get her back. Soran and Siren have received injuries in battle also, so I wouldn't say everything happens to Mizuki. She does have fairly rotten luck though. ^_~