New story on fiction press!
Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 11:07 pm
Hey, I know I posted the story here... but this is the grammatically correct version. Easier to read. Easier to like. Easier to keep up with. 
And! You can review!
http://www.fictionpress.com/secure/live ... chapter=1/
And! You can review!http://www.fictionpress.com/secure/live ... chapter=1/