Artemis Jade

[Soran Nightblade]

Hi! Welcome to Heirot! This is a strong start for your character. I was wondering if you could elaborate on a few small details before I approve.

- Since Heirot's world is a low-tech, medieval setting, could we adjust the character so that she is not a robot? If you'd like to keep the activatable armor, you could explain it through magic. For example, one character here can call forth his weapons from a pair of enchanted bangles he wears on his wrists. Hopefully this won't affect your idea for the character too much, but it would fit much better into this game's world.

- It would be neat to know more of her history. How and why has her heart been broken? Is there a special reason that she falls ill so easily? Has that had a big influence on her rough past? How did she meet Keppy and what is his/her personality like?

Thanks for all your effort on this character. It's almost there!

[Emora Deen]

Welcome to Heirot. You're character is a very nice start! She is quite young, so it will be interesting to see how her character sheet developes through your adventures. Remember to update it whenever major events happen in her life, since she is so young. ~~APPROVED~~

[Soran Nightblade]

Thank you for the changes! Looks good!

\(^_^)/ Approved