Poetry.

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Amenat

Poetry.

Post by Amenat »

Tears of Enternity.
Crystal drops roll down your cheek.
Into a silent eternity.
Only black surounds you.
All thoughts misconstrued.

Here in this eternity
a crystal drop falls.
And with all certainty
we cannot escape these black walls.

No one comes to the door.
No cheer beyond these walls.
Only darkness ever more.
You cannot ever call.

Lying six feet under;
Will you take me with you?
Just because of a blunder
But this is really true.

My eternity is black as night.
The black is absorbing all of me
I have given up all fights.
We'll be together soon, you'll see.

Amanda K

Copyright ©2007 Amanda K

Won an award for that. Anybody else have any good peotry or anything lately?
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Soran Nightblade
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Post by Soran Nightblade »

A bit sad, but I like it. Congrats on your award!
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